the Hardest Thing In This World Is to Live In It. Posted: 02-12-04 15:02pm
Hey here is something I wrote to try and
help me remeber a time when I was happy
and enjoyed and appricated life. Hope you
like it.
The first day of spring
and the wind blows wild
the rain comes down heavy
on a little weeping child.
Birds flying high
riding with the waves
animals begin to wake,
emerge from their caves.
The spring has come
a new dawn arises
the flowers start to grow
the child wipes her eyes.
Time moves forward
waking with the sun
trees so green
new life is born.
The morning sky
can be seen once again
colours so warm
so bright, so beautiful.
The child remebers.
.......................................
Day turns slowly to night
sitting in your room
you don't notice the change
time has no meaning.
You have work to do
a life to lead
people who care
but you sit and bleed.
Not knowing what to do
what to look for
who to talk to
you sit alone,
waiting.
Noting makes sence
you don't know were to go
have you anything to achieve?
Have you even got a soul?
These are just things I can relate to. I
am 16 and I am lost like most teenagers I
suppose. At the moment life is hard i'm
struggling with an eating disorder which
gets me down sometimes. I hope if anyone
reads these and can identify with any of
it that you realise your not alone and
everyone is struggling. The hardest thing
in this world is to live in it.
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autumn24
New User, Becoming EHEALTHy
Joined: 21 Jan 2004 Posts: 39 Location: new brunswick
Posted: 02-12-04 19:11pm
Your poem is beautifully written, hang on
to life.....I like to imagine that they
harder life is for someone the more
wonderful our lifes will become to make up
for today.
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Suzy
Active User, Really EHEALTHy
Joined: 20 Sep 2003 Posts: 530
Posted: 02-22-04 06:59am
Dear lostoyou,
it's a beautiful poem, and you hit the
nail on the head when you said "the
hardest thing in this world is to live in
it". I think people will relate to that
statement alone. Keep your head up, this
world needs you. Unfortunately the world
has a shortage of beautiful minded people
such as yourself.
