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Today when I was doing my creative writing work this was the assignment..

Fill in the bllanks

i see
i see
i think
i hear
i hear
i think
i touch
i touch
i believe


this is what I wrote

i see your face
i see you cry
i think "what could be wrong?"
i hear you cry
i hear you whisper
i think of reasons why
i touch your shoulder
i touch your cheek
i believe I love you


now can u fill in the blanks?
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replied February 17th, 2007
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Re: Poetry
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

poem removed cos it sucks.
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replied February 17th, 2007
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I see your eyes they keep me strong
i see myself falling though the love has gone
i think it is time for my flame to die
i hear your voice and it makes me cry.


I hear my heart breaking all over again
i think will this torture ever end and when?

I touch your cheek and you disppear
i touch your ghost though you are never here
i believe I am lost forever in a love that's no more,
destined to an eternity of hurt to the core
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replied February 17th, 2007
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And another (for angel)

i see you in the golden sun
i see you in the rain
i think of you wherever I am
i hear my heart break all over again

i hear the sound of angels singing
i think you're with them too
i touch your soft hair in my dreams
i touch my heart, it beats for you

i believe you were too good for this world,
and .God needed help from you
and one day we will all meet again
so I can say how much I love you
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replied February 17th, 2007
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beckster06 wrote:
and another (for angel)

i see you in the golden sun
i see you in the rain
i think of you wherever I am
i hear my heart break all over again

i hear the sound of angels singing
i think you're with them too
i touch your soft hair in my dreams
i touch my heart, it beats for you

i believe you were too good for this world,
and .God needed help from you
and one day we will all meet again
so I can say how much I love you


.Wow, I got chills!
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replied February 17th, 2007
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Aw thanks hun Smile
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replied February 17th, 2007
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Aww beckster your poems are really good, the one for angel makes me sad, it was good!
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I see the way you look at me when you think i'm not watching
i see how you turn from me when I am
i think, "how could this have happened to us?"
i hear the truth in your voice
i hear my soul cry
i think that I still love you
i touch you and you tense away
i touch you but you don't want me to
i believe we've come to the beginning of our end
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replied February 18th, 2007
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Aw k Sad
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replied February 18th, 2007
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It's all good, terra. Laughing the end of one thing is always the beginning of something else.
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replied February 18th, 2007
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I see love and hate, in the same room.
I see groups of people, each one keeping to itself.
I think that this isn't the way things should be.
I hear gossip being spread and rumors being created.
I hear the striking silence of no one doing anything to stop it.
I think that I may have lost faith in humanity.
I touch her shoulder, to see if she's okay.
I touch her soul, and despite what she says, I know that she isn't.
I believe that things change and people change, but not for the better, because the only thing we'll ever care about is self preservation.
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replied February 18th, 2007
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True kay Smile be strong, we're here for you!

And tdr that was good too! All of these are sad lol I need to make a happy one! I suck at poetry tho lol
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replied February 18th, 2007
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I think this is somewhat happier, .Terra.

I see everyone file into the room, finding their friends and taking a seat.
I see our director take the mic, and shuffle through papers to begin his speech.
I think that this is it, we're in the home stretch.
I hear our director starting his speech, losing his place, and cracking a joke.
I hear the familiar laughter of my fellow band members, and the familiar giggling silence that follows.
I think that this has the potential to be incredibly boring, or incredibly interesting, or maybe somewhere in between.
I touch the fake wooden arm rest, and pick at the seat number that's once again falling off.
I touch my friend's leg, since she keeps kicking me, albeit she doesn't mean to.
I believe that we're going to .Spain, and we'll have the time of our lives.
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replied February 18th, 2007
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Lol that sounds like something that must have really happened :p but that is happier haha I wanna go to spain
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hcobrunette06 wrote:
lol that sounds like something that must have really happened :p but that is happier haha I wanna go to spain


oh, how that happened...One particularly memorable portion of that speech (which lasted 2 1/2 freakin' hours!) was when my grade level principal described how, on the pre-trip, she basically beat off an old lady who tried to snatch her purse.
Yes, my .G.L.P beats up old ladies. Laughing
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