Very well written poetry. I love to read poetry as well as write it. This is very good. Poetry is a good outlet for your anger, use it when you feel that 'bad' side of you coming out. Get a piece of paper and a pen and just write down everything you are thinking so you can look back and see what triggers these outbreaks. If you can find the starting point maybe you can do something about your bipolar disorder. Best of luck, if you ever want to send some poetry my way you can always email me. If you ever need someone to vent to i'll be here for you.

Thank your for replying I was wanting to see what people would think as this has been actually the first time i've been able to get something more out there as I tend to have alot of my writing and poetry to myself.