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Q: Tell Me What U Think
asked by: CAMAROGIRL82 on December 7th, 2004
Experienced User
You probably don’t even care, but I want u to know,
you hold piece of my heart that would make me whole.
How could this have happened; how could this be through.
You came into my life and tore it in two
i have such strong feelings, that I am trying to let go
but it’s so hard to do, when they keep trying to show
jimmy you are my world and my life’s missing piece,
i just wish u would understand, and want to be with me.
I don’t love charlie; he never held a key to my heart.
It’s you who that has held that piece from the very start.
I feel like no one cares or give two shits about me,
i feel like I could disappear and no one would miss me.
Why can’t u see the things that lye true to your heart,
i could make u happy, but we need a new start.
If we start over clean it would be great,
i wish u would see the chance for us to take
i wish u would give me a chance to prove it to u.
I loved u with all my heart, and I still do.
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Princess385
replied on December 7th, 2004
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That's really good. I couldn't ever come up with something like that!! I'm not into poetry though. Smile
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xLove x Lostx
replied on December 7th, 2004
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Its pretty good...Just work abit on how it flows and fits together..And remember not to force it to rhyme, not all poems rhyme, nor do they have to
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rachrach
replied on December 7th, 2004
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I think it's good..
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LHSbabe0207
replied on December 7th, 2004
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Omg! You did a great job!!! Wink I agree no way in heck could I ever think of something like that lol.
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