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Hey guys.. I wrote this song for/ about my cousin.. This guy totally broke her heart, but she still like loves him.. I think alot of girls are in her situation.. But anyways, let me kno what u think!

-well, she was a drop dead gorgeous green-eyed girl
and he caught her eye with his looks to kill
he had 3 years on her, was about 18
and she was as young and innocent as she was green.

Some nights got hot and things went fast
and she’d linger wishing for that moment to last
cause he stole her heart, that green eyed girl
and she closed her eyes to the rest of the world

he made her promises that he couldn’t keep
promises that turned into lies
and he broke her heart more then once, that green-eyed girl
clueless boy don’t even know how many tears she’d cried
but she’ll never stop lovin’ him.

He promised her heaven but put her through hell
and that boy didn’t even know how she felt
she wanted to let go, but couldn’t because
she’ll never stop lovin him. Oh, she’ll never stop lovin’ him.

She closed her eyes to things she didn’t wanna see
but knew they were there.
And she couldn’t close her heart to how she felt
green-eyed girl, she was too in love with him.

Oh, he made her promises that he couldn’t keep
promises that turned into lies
and he broke her heart more then once, that green-eyed girl
clueless boy don’t even know how many tears she’d cried
but she’ll never stop lovin’ him.. Oh she’ll never stop lovin’ him

he told her to move on..It would never work out
that didn’t change how she felt and
he didn’t understand why.
But she knew it well, because he’s the only one who can make her smile
with tears in her eyes.

Oh, she’ll never stop lovin’
she’ll never stop lovin’ him.
Green-eyed girl, she’ll never stop lovin’ him.
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replied October 19th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
Niftyness...

I would change a few things though, just to give you a pointer!! But overall it was pretty good.
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replied October 19th, 2004
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Haha thanks.. I saw a poem I think u wrote for chanda before, it was really good.. Im jealous of your skills lol!
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replied October 19th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
I like it Smile catchy
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replied October 19th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
Cool =)

<3
gaby
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replied October 19th, 2004
Especially eHealthy
Wow. I have green eyes and josh is 3 yrs older than me..... Oh my
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replied October 19th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
Very talented!
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replied October 19th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
Wow nice song!! Good job have written others?
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