Hey guys.. I wrote this song for/ about
my cousin.. This guy totally broke her
heart, but she still like loves him.. I
think alot of girls are in her situation..
But anyways, let me kno what u think!
-well, she was a drop dead gorgeous
green-eyed girl
and he caught her eye with his looks to
kill
he had 3 years on her, was about 18
and she was as young and innocent as she
was green.
Some nights got hot and things went fast
and she’d linger wishing for that moment
to last
cause he stole her heart, that green eyed
girl
and she closed her eyes to the rest of the
world
he made her promises that he couldn’t
keep
promises that turned into lies
and he broke her heart more then once,
that green-eyed girl
clueless boy don’t even know how many
tears she’d cried
but she’ll never stop lovin’ him.
He promised her heaven but put her through
hell
and that boy didn’t even know how she
felt
she wanted to let go, but couldn’t
because
she’ll never stop lovin him. Oh, she’ll
never stop lovin’ him.
She closed her eyes to things she didn’t
wanna see
but knew they were there.
And she couldn’t close her heart to how
she felt
green-eyed girl, she was too in love with
him.
Oh, he made her promises that he couldn’t
keep
promises that turned into lies
and he broke her heart more then once,
that green-eyed girl
clueless boy don’t even know how many
tears she’d cried
but she’ll never stop lovin’ him.. Oh
she’ll never stop lovin’ him
he told her to move on..It would never
work out
that didn’t change how she felt and
he didn’t understand why.
But she knew it well, because he’s the
only one who can make her smile
with tears in her eyes.
Oh, she’ll never stop lovin’
she’ll never stop lovin’ him.
Green-eyed girl, she’ll never stop lovin’
him.
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mommabear16
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Posts: 1222 Location: illinois
Posted: 10-19-04 19:12pm
Niftyness...
I would change a few things though, just
to give you a pointer!! But overall it
was pretty good.
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oangelc543
Active User, Really EHEALTHy
Joined: 25 Sep 2004 Posts: 521 Location: TX
Posted: 10-19-04 19:18pm
Haha thanks.. I saw a poem I think u
wrote for chanda before, it was really
good.. Im jealous of your skills lol!
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jessamyn
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Joined: 18 Aug 2004 Posts: 4107 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: 10-19-04 20:34pm
I like it catchy
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bellax0x
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Joined: 10 Jun 2004 Posts: 3572 Location: Jersey Baby!
catchy