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FairyLexi

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Joined: 04 Jun 2004
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Location: chicago
My Poem
Posted: 10-08-04 19:30pm

This is the poem I submitted:

no longer yours

the smile quickly fades as the tears begin to fall
your legs to weak to walk so that's when you try to crawl
the man that you once knew is no longer who you know
his heart begins to disapear as his anger starts to show

you're too afraid to run but you're terrified to stay
you wish with all your might that this abuse would go away
all your courage starts to fade as his strength begins to grow
what he'll do to you tomorrow you already seem to know

you try to run from him but he just catches up to you
that's when he pins you to the ground and tells you that your life is through
you try to tell him that you love him and beg him for your life
but then he chokes you even harder as he reaches for the knife

with slashes all over your body now you crawl into the bath
the blood flows through the water while this man just points and laughs
you're wishing for your death now since you know that you can't win
you've desided that it's over so you let the darkness in

you sink lower in the tub while he watches overhead
he reaches in to grab you but then realizes you're dead
you'll no longer feel the beatings and the bruises you won't see
all because of your desicion to let go and just be free
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adormer221

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Joined: 29 Sep 2003
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Location: colorado

Posted: 10-08-04 19:32pm

Hey fari lexi is everything ok? Are you in a bad relationship hun?

Ash
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bellax0x

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Location: Jersey Baby!

Posted: 10-08-04 20:09pm

Thats beautiful! Is your town doing the domestic violence thing too?

<3
gaby
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smith8500

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Joined: 17 Sep 2003
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Posted: 10-08-04 20:12pm

Really awesome poem. Does it have any signifigace to your own relationship? I sure hope not!
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BbyBlu0602

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Joined: 10 Feb 2004
Posts: 822
Location: Virginia

Posted: 10-08-04 20:30pm

That's a really good poem. It also reminds me of a poem I submitted on the depression forum.
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FairyLexi

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Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 398
Location: chicago

Posted: 10-08-04 23:18pm

Thanks guys, all the poems I write have a little signifigance to my life but with this one I was just in a weird mood and thats what came out. But my relationship is doin good, if someone were to ever lay a hand on me i'd kick they're ass.
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LaurensEntourage

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Location: Austin, Texas

Posted: 10-08-04 23:20pm

Damn straight chickie.
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cherriegurl

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Joined: 11 Jul 2004
Posts: 1218
Location: Washington state

Posted: 10-09-04 00:10am

That is a sad poem but v.E.R.Y. Well written good job girlie!!
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nippz

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Posted: 10-09-04 19:58pm

Lovely poem
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