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IDABABY Extremely eHealthy
September 15th, 2004
Hello everyone,
I am writing a descriptive essay and having a horrible time with it. Its about how I am most like my childhood self. I am calling it something like my fiary tale or the fairy tale that ends. I am started it out just like a fairy tale once upon a time in a candy land world. Then moving on how I see things through my childhood eyes ...But as I grow up the candy land turns darker and colder every time I get a little older. Then shows how things are as I get older..And the candy land turns out to be a the real world..With violence and such. Anyways my point..Haha.

I need ideas on how to describe this candy land....That I see as a child. Like flowers made out of lolipops ect..If you can think of anything please help me out thanks!

Luv y'll,
kristin nicole
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Mommy4Amari
replied September 15th, 2004
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Hmmm... Confused

You can say that the candy land was made out of chocolate and the castle was gold and filled with candy, cakes, and cookies! Lol...I dunno!
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smith8500
replied September 15th, 2004
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I don't have many ideas to add, but huni! You started that paper out great! I love your idea! The candy land idea is awesome!
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IDABABY
replied September 15th, 2004
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:d aww thank you chanda! Smile
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sparklypixie12
replied September 15th, 2004
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Have you seen 'willy wonka & the chocolate factory'?? I would describe this candy land in the way willy wonka does when the children go into the factory. There are sweet umbrellas, giant gummy bears, flowers filled with cream & a chocolate lake. Good luck!
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bellax0x
replied September 15th, 2004
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Heres some ideas, idk if im too, uhm violent lol..

"rivers of chocolate slowely turn to blood. What used to be smiles filled with happiness are now frowns and looks of scorn filled with deciet and anger."

"my secure childhood world contained no handicaps, racism, or prejudice. With every step I take, and every day that pases, that thought fades more and more."


idk id think of more but im lazy lol

<3
gaby
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IDABABY
replied September 15th, 2004
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That was beautiful gaby, come out with some more damn it haha...You are too damn good
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smith8500
replied September 15th, 2004
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Gaby is awesome!
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