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bellax0x

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Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Posts: 3572
Location: Jersey Baby!
Another Poem I Wrote
Posted: 09-03-04 22:16pm

Teardrop falls from the bright blue eyes
of a girl confused and dazed
this tear is like no other, though
with what its filled she's completely amazed

baby clothes, and dirty looks
are what inhabits this tear
but how can she dispise, yet love
this baby she holds so dear

all because she was so young
now people turn their backs
they dont give her the time of day
yet they don't even know the facts

she loves this baby with all she's got
even if thats not too much
dreaming of the day her gift will arrive
and she can feel his precious touch

the teardrop descends toward the floor
the girl watches it fall
she doesnt care what people think
shes received the greatest gift of all

a teardrop falls from the bright blue eyes
of a girl confused and dazed
as her baby is now placed in her arms
with what its filled shes completely amazed



hope you like it!!! :d

<3
gaby
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Katherine19

Experienced User , Rather EHEALTHy
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Posts: 248
Location: Houston

Posted: 09-03-04 22:20pm

That really good! Smile
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bellax0x

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Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Posts: 3572
Location: Jersey Baby!

Posted: 09-03-04 22:22pm

Thanks!

<3
gaby
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June4life

Active User, Really EHEALTHy
Joined: 08 Jul 2004
Posts: 550

Posted: 09-03-04 23:46pm

Gaby thats awesome!!!

<3 june
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smith8500

Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 17 Sep 2003
Posts: 6623
Location: Louisiana

Posted: 09-03-04 23:55pm

Gaby, huni! That is a really awesome poem! Great job huni!
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Michelle1337

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Joined: 04 Aug 2004
Posts: 1739
Location: Houston, Texas

Posted: 09-04-04 00:15am

Wow! Thats awesome! I like it a whole lot!!
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bellax0x

Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Posts: 3572
Location: Jersey Baby!

Posted: 09-04-04 06:30am

Thanks guys! =)

<3
gaby
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lusciouskiss16

Active User, Really EHEALTHy
Joined: 01 Sep 2004
Posts: 516
Location: Missouri

Posted: 09-04-04 10:57am

Thats really good gaby..!! I love hearing poems..Got anymore?
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bellax0x

Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Posts: 3572
Location: Jersey Baby!

Posted: 09-04-04 20:55pm

Not right now, but ill keep writing! =)

<3
gaby
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