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Q: Kind Of...a Deep Poem I Wrote Last Night.
asked by: mommabear16 on August 10th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
The deed is done.
He made his will.
He wrote his note.
Now were's the pills

lifes just too hard.
Not worth living.
No more thoughts, worth giving.

He takes the drugs.
His heart is beating fast.
Then it slows down.
He's dead just like that.

He felt no love.
He felt no shame.
All he felt, was doing it pain.


Now he's gone.
He died alone.
All because no love was shone.

The deed is done.
He made his will.
He had wrote the note.
Empty bottle of pills.
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Scarf
replied on August 10th, 2004
Active User, very eHealthy
Wow..Thats really good. And sad Sad
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MegEve
replied on August 10th, 2004
Experienced User
Nikki, you have a talent that does not need to go unnoticed. You're awesome!

Love,
megan
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smith8500
replied on August 10th, 2004
Especially eHealthy
Hey
Nikki, huni. It kills me that you don't do something about this. You have so much talent! I wish I could do 1/2 as good as that! Oh my! I love it!
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sparklypixie12
replied on August 10th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
Wow-you're seriously good
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