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Q: Well Here Is My Newest Song...
asked by: mommabear16 on June 30th, 2004
Extremely eHealthy
I might make some additonal touches to it.


Dead awaits me at my door.
Only because I feel love no more
life is only a web
spiders wait to feed...On my flesh
voices screaming at me....

Bleeding hearts for you they wait
bleeding hearts for you....
Bleeding hearts for you they wait
screaming out your name

i can't try to fight
im lost from it all, in the dark, in the night
can't find the way out, take me to the light
still voices scream out at me...Death awaits and..

Bleeding hearts for you they wait
bleeding hearts for you...
Bleeding hearts for you they wait
screaming out my name..
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Mesmerizeu15
replied on June 30th, 2004
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Ouch.
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mommabear16
replied on June 30th, 2004
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????????
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Mesmerizeu15
replied on June 30th, 2004
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Thats really scary..
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Scarf
replied on June 30th, 2004
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I really like this one. Its my favorite of all the ones you shared!
Shannon xoxox
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WhiteDragon213
replied on June 30th, 2004
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Oh I can definately see some potential with this one. I read the words and once I got the the bleeding hearts section of lyrics I violin started playing in my head. If only I could give you the sound from my imagination. I hear lots of strings in this one. Cello, viola, violins, harp, piano. Later could come distorted guitar, etc.

In short, I like it.
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mommabear16
replied on June 30th, 2004
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When the bleeding hearts part comes on I go really uber high when I sing it...So the volin would be so perfect.
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WhiteDragon213
replied on June 30th, 2004
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There's a tracy bonham song that comes as inspiration. On a hard-to-find ep called the bee ep, there's a song called "all thumbs."

i don't know what direction you wanted to go with this, but other songs that "feel" the same as this one are:

"disarm" by smashing pumpkins
"my immortal" by evanesence


that's all I can get for now.
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babyrae
replied on June 30th, 2004
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Those lyrics would go good wit the "my immortal" type song!

Shauna
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mommabear16
replied on July 1st, 2004
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh evanescence rocks my socks!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol......Sorry i'm obsessed.
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