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kaiteo

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Poem Posted: 01-29-08 23:58pm


I'm kind of in a mood. It's hard to comprehend How fast it goes by It's a trainwreck Then a miracle. We are human We are skin and bone and blood and tears. I am bulletproof And you are my bullet. Is love something you feel Or something that is done? I don't want an answer Everything I ask is rhetorical. I don't want an answer From you or any ink stained paper. They confirm beliefs More than anything else I don't want your theories. Pray for me I won't care. Prayers are an attempt to pretend we matter You don't. I don't. We have eight decades Until we are a part of the earth. Show me you care. I'll still not believe you. I am a machine Without a control.

ladylee70

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Posted: 01-30-08 00:05am


You really need to write and send it in somewhere - get published. In other words, that was really powerful. Perhaps start with a few good short stories. You really have a way with words. I took a creative writing class in college and it stressed me out. I am not creative at all.

kaiteo

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Posted: 01-30-08 00:30am


I don't like classes. I wouldn't take a photography class because I don't like being told what to do with my art. I go freestyle. If you think my work is good (which I really don't think it's that good) you should see the way my friends Jazzy and Anna write. Talk about powerful. But thank you

young Girl

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Location: everythings better in, texas USA

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Posted: 01-30-08 00:38am


katieithinkiminlovewithyou come live in texas! seriously its beautiful i love it

acruz

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Joined: 09 Aug 2007
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Posted: 01-30-08 11:37am


Katie---wow...you are awesome!! You really know how to make feelings show...

O0o0h_baby

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Joined: 12 Dec 2007
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Location: Northern California,

Posted: 01-30-08 17:54pm


Full of emotions Katie, it's beautiful.

kaiteo

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Posted: 01-30-08 19:31pm


I wrote it before work. It was basically all of my feelings balled into one. It wasn't really meant to be a poem, but somehow turned out that way. Thanks for the feedback, girls :]

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