Dear e-health forum,
addiction of mine;
a place that I go
and waste so much time.
A poem I write,
from my heart to you;
For the server is down,
and I've nothing to do.
I'll play speedy bubbles,
write a journal or two.
Maybe work on a picture,
or play with some glue.
Oh maintenance time,
You make me so blue
for when e-health is down,
I have nothing to do.
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Jules
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Joined: 19 Aug 2006 Posts: 3789 Location: Merrie Englande, UK
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Posted: 08-24-07 09:53am
Very good!
And true...
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Tylanas
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 13 Jul 2005 Posts: 12985
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Posted: 08-24-07 12:15pm
Lol, I almost panicked yesterday when it
was down during the afternoon.
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HcoBrunette06
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 06 Dec 2005 Posts: 8005 Location: Missouri, United States
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Posted: 08-26-07 10:29am
lmao eiri, it's so true. this place
is so addictinggggg.
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young Girl
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 13932 Location: everythings better in, texas USA
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Posted: 08-26-07 10:34am
eiri did you write that? i love it
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Tylanas
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 13 Jul 2005 Posts: 12985
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Posted: 08-26-07 12:44pm
the_girlfreind
wrote:
eiri did you write that? i
love it
Of course I wrote it lol. I'm a closet
poet.
Here's another treat. This one's actually
supposed to be a song. And the lines are
supposed to have a rotating syllable
pattern. Sort of like 7575, 33769.... well
okay there's not much of a pattern I guess
lol. Maybe it was the other one. Oh yeah,
it was the other one. It was 575 like a
haiku the WHOLE way through.
Prism's Sin
A simple trick of the light
and my fingers drift
a prism beckons gently
coaxing the light to sin
Innocence
a pure white
the darkness is open
as the rainbow spills forth
My lips are just a trick of the light
I swear I'll touch you lightly
No one will see the shadow
I leave behind
tainted rainbow
light coaxed to sin
by the prism
Innocence
a pure white
the darkness is open
as the rainbow spills forth
My fingers are just a trick of the light
Is the prism to blame
for spreading your colors
so garishly over the table
Pure light coaxed to sin
by the simple prism
Tainted rainbow,
touched by shadow
A simple trick of the light
as my fingers drift
I beckoned you to sin,
a rainbow in the night.
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Tmddyan
Moderator
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Hey Posted: 08-28-07 13:10pm
send the ehealth to lee I love that.
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Chezzy
Experienced User , Rather EHEALTHy
Joined: 16 Jan 2007 Posts: 152
Re: the E-health Poem Posted: 09-10-07 03:49am
Eiri
wrote:
E-Health Maintenance Time
Dear e-health forum,
addiction of mine;
a place that I go
and waste so much time.
A poem I write,
from my heart to you;
For the server is down,
and I've nothing to do.
I'll play speedy bubbles,
write a journal or two.
Maybe work on a picture,
or play with some glue.
Oh maintenance time,
You make me so blue
for when e-health is down,
I have nothing to
do.
Heh heh That's excellent eiri Love it..
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jamellie
New User, Becoming EHEALTHy
Joined: 15 Oct 2007 Posts: 34 Location: ,
Posted: 10-25-07 03:19am
nice poem... I like it..
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Magical Logic
Extremely EHEALTHy
Joined: 14 Mar 2006 Posts: 2248
Posted: 10-25-07 08:10am
u have got too much time on your hands to
sit around and write about ehealth
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*star*
Supporter
Joined: 12 Dec 2006 Posts: 1804 Location: ,
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Thanked:24
Posted: 10-25-07 10:04am
Well...I think that was a good poem... Im
sure it didn't take that long to write.
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Tylanas
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 13 Jul 2005 Posts: 12985
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Posted: 10-25-07 11:04am
And it was over the summer when I was off
from classes lol.
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young Girl
Especially EHEALTHy
Joined: 21 Jun 2007 Posts: 13932 Location: everythings better in, texas USA
