Join Our Community!
Share
What happens during labor? What do contractions feel like? And how do I know that labor has begun? Read on to learn about birthing basics....
Signs of labor occur after 36 weeks of pregnancy. Learn about the difference between real and false contractions. Plus, we outline signs of delivery complicati...
Almost all women worry about the pain of childbirth. Preparing for childbirth includes thinking about how you'd like to cope with the pain of labor. Read on for...
Avatar
Q: What Do You Think?
asked by: shortgeek on August 19th, 2007
Active User, very eHealthy
I just wrote this poem for a small ttc poem contest. I've never been good at writing poems, especially if I was trying to capture an emotion. Here I'm trying for perseverence but it also feels a little sad. What do you think?

Hush little eggies, don’t you cry
Momma’s got a plan to multiply
Success is only a small chance
So momma’s gonna do a baby dance
And if that baby dance don’t succeed
Momma’s gonna spread some preseed
And if that preceed’s just a dream
Momma’s gonna take some clomiphene
And if the clomiphene stymies
Momma’s gonna get an HSG
And if it shows my tubes are a mess
Momma can still use IVF
So hush little eggies, don’t you cry
Momma’s gonna give it another try
Did you find this post useful?
|
Replies(8)
User Profile
monkeygirl22
replied on August 19th, 2007
Extremely eHealthy
Oh that is so cute Shorty! I think you should definitely enter that.
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
Jules
replied on August 19th, 2007
Extremely eHealthy
Oh that's lovely! Really nicely done!

What's preseed - like precum? What do you mean by spreading it? Sorry, think I might be missing summat here Laughing
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
monkeygirl22
replied on August 19th, 2007
Extremely eHealthy
Preseed is a special lubricant to use when ttc. It promotes a healthy environment for sperm where as store brand lubricants can hinder the sperm from getting where they need to be.
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
fairytale007
replied on August 19th, 2007
Extremely eHealthy
That's such a sweet poem! I hope you enter it and win! Smile Good luck.
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
Jules
replied on August 20th, 2007
Extremely eHealthy
monkeygirl22 wrote:
Preseed is a special lubricant to use when ttc. It promotes a healthy environment for sperm where as store brand lubricants can hinder the sperm from getting where they need to be.


Ah, yeah that makes more sense than the mental image I had of you smearing pre-cum everywhere! Laughing

I hope you win - I think the poem is brilliant Wink
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
HcoBrunette06
replied on August 20th, 2007
Especially eHealthy
i love it because it came from your heart and that's all that matters Smile i think its neat.
Did you find this post useful?
|
Avatar
shortgeek
replied on August 20th, 2007
Active User, very eHealthy
Thank you. I did change one line: I replaced "And if clomiphene stymies" with "And if af still visits me." It sounds simpler.
Did you find this post useful?
|
User Profile
CaNdItAs CrAzY LaNd
replied on August 20th, 2007
Supporter
llllooovvveeee iiittttt love it love it Very Happy
Did you find this post useful?
|
Quick Reply
Search