I just wrote this poem for a small ttc
poem contest. I've never been good at
writing poems, especially if I was trying
to capture an emotion. Here I'm trying
for perseverence but it also feels a
little sad. What do you think?
Hush little eggies, don’t you cry
Momma’s got a plan to multiply
Success is only a small chance
So momma’s gonna do a baby dance
And if that baby dance don’t succeed
Momma’s gonna spread some preseed
And if that preceed’s just a dream
Momma’s gonna take some clomiphene
And if the clomiphene stymies
Momma’s gonna get an HSG
And if it shows my tubes are a mess
Momma can still use IVF
So hush little eggies, don’t you cry
Momma’s gonna give it another try
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monkeygirl22
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Posted: 08-19-07 10:41am
Oh that is so cute Shorty! I think you
should definitely enter that.
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Jules
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Posted: 08-19-07 11:52am
Oh that's lovely! Really nicely done!
What's preseed - like precum? What do you
mean by spreading it? Sorry, think I
might be missing summat here
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monkeygirl22
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Posted: 08-19-07 12:21pm
Preseed is a special lubricant to use when
ttc. It promotes a healthy environment for
sperm where as store brand lubricants can
hinder the sperm from getting where they
need to be.
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fairytale007
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Posted: 08-19-07 23:24pm
That's such a sweet poem! I hope you enter
it and win! Good luck.
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Jules
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Posted: 08-20-07 00:50am
monkeygirl22
wrote:
Preseed is a special
lubricant to use when ttc. It promotes a
healthy environment for sperm where as
store brand lubricants can hinder the
sperm from getting where they need to
be.
Ah, yeah that makes more sense than the
mental image I had of you smearing pre-cum
everywhere!
I hope you win - I think the poem is
brilliant
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HcoBrunette06
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Posted: 08-20-07 01:03am
i love it because it came from your heart
and that's all that matters i think its neat.
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shortgeek
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Posted: 08-20-07 18:18pm
Thank you. I did change one line: I
replaced "And if clomiphene stymies" with
"And if af still visits me." It sounds
simpler.
Good luck.
